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Ria hand drawned

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This is my oc hand drawned please critic me because it's kinda bad
Image size
1836x3264px 2.26 MB
Make
Xiaomi
Model
HM 1S
Shutter Speed
1/33 second
Aperture
F/2.2
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 5, 2017, 11:36:33 PM
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The stance is a bit unnatural and the clothes don't seem to match her body shape, her breasts are sitting on her collar bones which is weird and all of her facial features ae sitting too high on her face. Even if she has bangs her forehead still exists. Another thing off about the face is her ears which look more like warts on the side of her head. Another problem is here arms, arms reach down to your mid thigh. Your shadowing and line work are pretty good, try looking at a real life reference.